Wednesday, February 26, 2014

Editing run-on sentences

When writing anything, the writer must write with the mindset of being able to manipulate the readers mind towards any direction; this is where the writers "aim" come into play.

1 comment:

  1. Good use of the semi-colon to divide the two thoughts but not overcomplicate things. You do, however, need to fix the SV Agr with "come" and use the apostrophe for the possessive.

    "The writer's "aim" comes into play."

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